Bored....

Simply because I am bored,I have decided to post up lyrics for a song i wrote when i was bored,but this song has no tune and was written on the spur of the moment while humming rubbish to myself.But it is still copyrighted okay?But comments and ammendments are appreciated.

I always knew
That my love was too much for you
But I never knew
Until I saw it(x2)

When I looked into your eyes
When I looked into your eyes
You told me
Save me from your love,baby
Save me from your love
Cause I just can't accept it
But I really can't bear to tell you..

I'll sacrifice
Woh,all my love for you
If it means that finally,
oh finally,you be...
happy...

Cause when I looked into your eyes
You told me
Save me from your love,
Save me from your love
Cause I just can't accept it
But I really can't bear to tell you..

I guess this pain,
has already ceased for you
But you shall never know,woh
of my deep pain...
no you won't

Cause when I saw you once again
Cause when I saw you once again
You told me
That you were so happy
happier than before,
but deep down inside of me..
I wished for more...

I wanted a you and me
But I wanted you happy
Now I know I simply can't love you
Now I know you never really had loved me
But I still love you

My sacrifice
was more than just painful
but in return for you happiness
I will never say a word
And you shall never know of my pain
Ever....

But when you looked into my eyes
But when you looked into my eyes
You saw me
Bleeding deep inside
I just couldn't help myself
I truly deeply love you
And you'll always be the only one in my heart.

But I know,But I know
You will never love me too
But I'll always love you
And that will always be the truth
As is my pain.....

©

There.Now that i typed it out,i realised this is a song meant to be sung by a boy.And while i was typing and thinking randomly,i also realised i have absolutely no source of inspiration.It just came to me while i was listening to think of my and i scribbled down n edited a bit...just a bit.so its rather crude right now..kinda sadistic,and also one of those songs with a story in it.Think its rather meaningful,but,still,mildly stupid sounding in overall.There was a tune with it at first,but as i wrote the lyrics the tune didnt follow well enough so i just let go of it and continued with the lyrics.So yea.please giv constructive comments....cause i really want to know my songwriting skills,if its good i might continue once in a while,not on a regular basis.
I wanted to post up some of I Yun's drawings-a work of manga art i tell you!-but she doesnt want me to trace or change or drawings,and i think scanning counts.so,well,i cant.unfortunately....cause they are so great.she even custom made one for me.So happy.....
haha,how lame of me
That's all for the day's second post....so buaiiii